This month's Words for Wednesday prompts are supplied by jabblog and posted at River's blog over here. This week's prompts are: hand, useful, panic, horse, shape, sharp and/or nuisance, boredom, quizzical, history, warfare, hair and bonus words notification, money, cotton, spray, clock, mug.
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Fiction: The Friends Market
Wearing her blue with white clouds pajamas under her pink raincoat and pink rainboots, Jacklyn strolled down the aisles of Old Friends Market. She glanced at her wrist watch: 12:01. She had plenty of time. The market didn't close until 3:03 am.
Two months of leisure wanders around the market had turned into a daily ritual. Each night, she came and even when she was looking for something particular, she found, it didn't matter. Being here was a haven. Always, there was a strange, frantic elation cruising through her just as she stepped inside the market.
In the spacious store, Jacklyn passed one or two shoppers. Soft music from the speaker weaved through the air. About two feet away, a man with an orange beard lurched toward a giant bag of candles and threw it into his cart already full of bags of cat food. He gave her a nod as he passed her, leaving an odor that reminded her of high school days.
It was easy to just drop anything she thought useful into her cart but when Jacklyn checked, it was filled with bags of dog food. She did not panic. It was her habit to buy dog food whenever she came to the market. Her dog, Mickey, was a Harlequin Dane. His appetite was as huge as a horse. Sometimes she wondered why she owned a dog bigger than her but when she looked at him, she stopped wondering. Unlike his kind, Mickey embraced boredom so he was never a nuisance. She had no sharp eye for anything but she had always thought Mickey was worthy even if he practically ate through her money.
When she was wrong or made a bad choice, Mickey would give her his quizzical look with one eyebrow raised. If she had Mickey before she met Ted, she might not have gotten married. But even if Mickey had given her that look, perhaps she wouldn't have listened as she was too much into Ted back then. Her marriage had been a constant warfare. They were always fighting and unable to agree on anything. After the divorce six years ago, she was hesitant to get a dog due to her history of short-lived pets but once Mickey was in her life, there was no more doubt.
She picked up a bottle of shampoo, conditioner and hair spray. It was expensive to own a Great Dane so Jacklyn had to sacrifice a few things such as salon visits. It was madness trying to tame her unruly hair that sometimes grew into a giant bubble shape but she persisted.
Across from Jacklyn, a tiny woman was placing bags of various pet foods into three carts. A few times, she shook or nodded her head as she peered down the floor here and there with quick glances at the giant, analog clock surrounded by a rooster hanging on the back wall.
Jacklyn looked away. She picked up a box of cotton balls and a bottle of hand lotion and tossed them into her cart. As she near the next aisle, she read the notification about taking your pets for regular checkups at the vet. Four months ago, the vet found a tumor in Mickey's brain. Had they removed it, he would die but if they didn't he would be in pain all his life so she made the decision. When they gave him the injection, Jacklyn was calm but afterward, she destroyed most of her home furniture.
She turned into another aisle and paused to smile at a coffee mug with the slogan: Every dog deserves his bone. Turning and going into the next aisle, she picked up three cans of coffee beans. The scent of coffee always perked Mickey up.
The padding of feet made her look to her left. There was Mickey walking beside her. He had glints in his dark eyes. She glanced at her wrist watch: 1:03. He was on time as usual. When she dropped a box of popcorn into her cart, Mickey gave her his quizzical look. She took it out and put it back onto the shelf. Moving up and down the aisle, she would glance at Mickey before putting an item in her cart. He either gave her his quizzical look or licked his muzzle for approval.
After she paid, Jacklyn pushed the cart with her bags of purchases toward the exit's double doors which slid open to the pouring rain outside. Mickey followed her but he stopped just before the doors. She turned to face him. This was where she had to leave him each night. Seeing her Mickey again was a joy but she couldn't take him home no matter how much she wanted to. He only existed in the market now. She lingered, rubbing his ears, giving him kisses before heading out.
Walking five steps, she paused and turned around. The doors to the market were closed and the lights were out. Jacklyn dried her eyes, glanced at her wrist watch: 3:04. There was always tomorrow night and the next.
"My life is spent in one long effort to escape from the commonplaces of existence." – Doyle
May 28, 2026
Fiction: The Friends Market
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What a sad and sweet story.
ReplyDeletemessymimi: Thank you for reading. And thank you for dropping by. Have a lovely day.
DeleteI loved it, but I'm a little confused...she took a new dog also called Mickey when the first Mickey died?
ReplyDeleteRoberta: No, it's the same dog. Just think of the market for hanging out with your deceased pet's spirit. Perhaps I should have used the other ending where the market disappears once she steps outside the market. Or perhaps I should say something about it being the same dog?
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Roberta: I rewrote the last bit a little. It should be clearer now. And you really did make a really good point. Thank you for that.
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No, the ending was fine! I understood that he only existed in the market now, and I liked the story even more for not spelling it out. The part that confused me was this one:
Delete"When she was wrong or made a bad choice, Mickey would give her his quizzical look with one eyebrow raised. She regretted not listening to him when he gave her that look when she told him she was marrying Ted. Her marriage had been a constant warfare. They were always fighting and unable to agree on anything. After the divorce six years ago, she was hesitant to get a dog due to her history of short-lived pets but once Mickey was in her life, there was no more doubt."
I reasoned that, if Mickey gave her the look before she married Ted, she couldn't have gotten him after the divorce, unless he was a different dog with the same name...Also, at first I thought that she was buying all that dog food to take it home. Same for the coffee. But Mickey isn't home, he's in the market, so I guess she buys him food and leaves it there for him? and the fact that Mickey perked up at the smell of coffee doesn't necessarily mean that she makes coffee for him to sniff - I guess she makes coffee when she's at home, and it just brings back memories of Mickey perking up.
Roberta: Buying dog food, coffee beans, are habits, maybe ones that she needs to do to get over him, sort of like therapy.
DeleteI've edited it again. I aim to make it all correct. Thank you for the feedback.
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Glad you were willing to make use of my feedback - I really enjoyed your story, there was just that paragraph that gave me pause. The rest could be explained in different ways, and sometimes the best stories are the ones that leave you wondering. P.S.: I reread it 🙂.
DeleteYour story reminds us how important that pets are in our lives.
ReplyDeleteLive and Learn: Oh yes. Sometimes pets helps us more than we know.
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Lissa, que linda história e despedir-se de Mickey no mercado é triste...Ainda bem sempre é e há outro dia para o reencontro! Adorei! beijos, tudo de bom,chica
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