Fiction: Criminal

The choices for today are: (1) constant, (2) cups, (3) criminal. The choose word is criminal.

Fiction: Criminal
From behind the counter, the clerk eyes the girl as she darts around the store. Two long blond braids down her back and a pink baseball cap with rabbit ears on her head. Up and down the aisle, her laceless sneakers squeak on the plastic tiled floor. For a long while, the girl keeps wandering. Sometimes, all the clerk sees are the tips of those pink rabbit ears.
    A fight breaks out in aisle five so he runs there to check it out but it only lasts a few moments. When he looks for the girl, she is gone. Saddened, he returns to stand behind the counter and watches the guy attends customers with such clumsy laziness that he gets bore and thinks about his death.
    All it took to kill him was a box of jujubes. Back then, he was just a boy trying to earn some college money. Why did he bother trying to catch a thief just for a box of candy that cost two dollars? Such a petty crime. Such a high price to pay.
    Then there was the girl with the rabbit ears cap. It was her the man stole the candy for. The clerk saw her after he had crawled near the glass door. Under the brilliant sunshine, she was in the blue convertible with the top down and reading a magazine as if she was some princess. The thief got into her car and they drove off.
    For years, he thought finding the girl would answer why he was killed for a box of candy. Thirty-three years he has chased her but he had always missed - just a hair breath of time off. But it's only time. He has plenty of it - more than most ghosts, he suspects. Death has a way of prolonging time.
    But he has not found her. She must be dead. His memory of her face had faded into nondescript. But he keeps looking for her wherever he goes. It passes the time.

For tomorrow, the letter D, the choices are (1) dayum, (2) delete, (3) diva. Choose which word I might ramble about or tell a story.

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Brevity

The choices for today are: (1) brevity, (2) bedevil, (3) blabbermouth. The chosen word is brevity.

Twitter (I'll never use the new name) used to be 140 characters which I had always liked and had attempted them but I failed to like the brevity of it and quit. But I liked that people are forced to use shorter means of expression. I think it's hard to pare down what you want to say to 140 characters (which equals to about 28 or more words). I do envy people who can say a lot with a few words.

Do you have any thoughts on brevity?

For tomorrow, the letter C, the choices are (1) constant, (2) cups, (3) criminal. Choose which word I might ramble about or tell a story.

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IWSG Apr 2025: Are cliches bad?

You hear it all the time in book reviews - the writing is cliche or something similar. Cliche or cliché, according to dictionary.com, refers to something trite, hackneyed, overly familiar, or commonplace phrase, theme, or expression.
        I try to avoid using cliches in my writing but I think I fail sometimes because I don't think anyone can avoid them if they are readers and in most cases, writers. I am all too familiar with words I read often and some sticks to my mind so even when I don't try to use cliches, they just pop in my head without me realizing.
    Generally, I don't think cliches are bad unless they are used excessively though I can't say I know all the cliches but just enough to recognize them. There are cliches that are just right and says exactly what can be easily understood so using them isn't a bad idea. Maybe not everyone can recognize cliches because when you're reading, you don't go looking for them but they certainly populate books even if you don't know them.

As a reader or as a writer, do you think cliches are bad?
  
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